Kara - Revision history

OtanSysop at 20:21, 24 September 2024

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OtanSysop at 20:16, 24 September 2024

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OtanSysop: /* Factions */

2021-04-20T17:21:21Z

Factions

OtanSysop: /* References */

2021-04-20T16:28:41Z

References

OtanSysop at 01:57, 20 April 2021

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OtanSysop at 01:56, 20 April 2021

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OtanSysop at 01:56, 20 April 2021

2021-04-20T01:56:15Z

OtanSysop: /* Amenities */

2021-04-19T04:55:53Z

Amenities

OtanSysop at 04:50, 19 April 2021

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OtanSysop at 04:46, 19 April 2021

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 == Geography ==
 [[File:KaraHood.jpg|thumb|400px|Kara and surroundings.]]
-[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls in the [[Kara Aydahar Region]] region in the [[Aydahari Confederation]].
+[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls in the [[Kara Aydahar Region]] region in the [[Altinqor]].
 == Amenities ==

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    | caption        = A Map of Kara
    | native_name    =
-   | country        = [[Aydahar Confederation]]
+   | country        = [[Altinqor]]
    | region         = [[Kara Aydahar Region]]
    | leader         = [[Zhenis Yerbolat]]
    | government     = Town Eldest
-   | controlled_by  = [[Aydahar Confederation]]
+   | controlled_by  = [[Altinqor]]
    | population     = 16,905
    | racial_mix     =
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    | features       = [[City walls]], [[Citadel]], [[Market]], [[Temple]], [[Shanty town]]
 }}
-[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls and the '''Capitol City''' of [[Kara Aydahar Region]] region in the [[Aydahar Confederation]].
+[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls and the '''Capitol City''' of [[Kara Aydahar Region]] region in the [[Altinqor]].
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 [[Category:Settlements]]
 [[Category:Aydahari Settlements]]
-[[Category:Aydahar Confederation Settlements]]
+[[Category:Altinqor Settlements]]

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 == Local Factions and Personalities ==
 ===Factions===
-* [[Kara Militia]] - The [[Kara Militia]] is responsible for protecting the citizens of the settlement from threats within and without.
+* [[Kara Militia]] - The [[Kara Militia]] is responsible for protecting the citizens of the settlement from threats within and without.  At any given time, the [[Kara Militia]] boasts around 200 officers, typically with some degree of fighter training.
 ===Personalities===

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 [[Category:Settlements]]
-[[Category:Human Settlements]]
+[[Category:Aydahari Settlements]]
 [[Category:Aydahar Confederation Settlements]]

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    | features       = [[City walls]], [[Citadel]], [[Market]], [[Temple]], [[Shanty town]]
 }}
-[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls and the '''Capitol City''' of [[Kara Aydahar Region]] region in the [[Aydahari Confederation]].
+[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls and the '''Capitol City''' of [[Kara Aydahar Region]] region in the [[Aydahar Confederation]].

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 == Amenities ==
 [[Kara]] has a number of goods and services.  Venues include:
-* [[Kara Citadel]]
+* [[Kara Citadel]] - This mighty citadel has several functions.  It serves as a stronghold for both the Town [[Elder of Akkuba]] and the [[Elder of Kara Aydahar Region]].  It also serves as a military headquarters for the [[Aydahari Military]].
-* [[Kara Chandry of Jormungandr]]
+* [[Kara Chantry of Jormungandr]] - The town's primary place of worship.
 == Local Factions and Personalities ==

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    | native_name    =
    | country        = [[Aydahari Confederation]]
-   | region         = [[Kar Shire]]
+   | region         = [[Kara Aydahar Region]]
    | leader         = [[Zhenis Yerbolat]]
    | government     = Town Eldest
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    | features       = [[City walls]], [[Citadel]], [[Market]], [[Temple]], [[Shanty town]]
 }}
-[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls in the [[Kar Shire]] region in the [[Aydahari Confederation]].
+[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls and the '''Capitol City''' of [[Kara Aydahar Region]] region in the [[Aydahari Confederation]].
 == Government ==
-[[Zhenis Yerbolat]] has been appointed to the position of [[Eldest of Kara]]. The Town Eldest of [[Kara]] is a position that may either be granted by the Eldest of Aydahar or through natural attrition.  The Town Eldest is often quite literally the eldest Aydahar in the settlement. [[Eldest of the Kar Shire]] is a position that may either be granted by the Eldest of Aydahar or through natural selection.  The regional Eldest is often quite literally the eldest Aydahar in the region. They are responsible for affairs both dragon and Adahari
+There are two levels of government in [[Kara]] the regional capitol of [[Kara Aydahar Region]].  There is the regional government and the city government.   The city government is run by [[Zhenis Yerbolat]] who wasw appointed to the position of [[Eldest of Kara]]. The Town Eldest of [[Kara]] is a position that may either be granted by the [[Eldest of Aydahar]] or through natural attrition.
 == Geography ==
 [[File:KaraHood.jpg|thumb|400px|Kara and surroundings.]]
-[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls in the [[Kar Shire]] region in the [[Aydahari Confederation]].
+[[Kara]] is a settlement of 16,905 souls in the [[Kara Aydahar Region]] region in the [[Aydahari Confederation]].
 == Amenities ==
 [[Kara]] has a number of goods and services.  Venues include:
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 ===Personalities===
-* [[Lyazzat Serzhan]] - has been appointed to the position of [[Eldest of the Kar Shire]]. This is a position that may either be granted by the [[Eldest of Aydahar]] or through natural selection.  The regional Eldest is often quite literally the eldest Aydahar in the region. They are responsible for affairs both dragon and [[Adahar]]i.
+* [[Lyazzat Serzhan]] - has been appointed to the position of [[Eldest of the Kara Aydahar Region]]. This is a position that may either be granted by the [[Eldest of Aydahar]] or through natural selection.  The regional Eldest is often quite literally the eldest Aydahar in the region. They are responsible for affairs both dragon and [[Adahar]]i.
-* [[Zhenis Yerbolat]] - has been appointed to the position of [[Eldest of Kara]]. The Town Eldest of [[Kara]] is a position that may either be granted by the [[Eldest of the Kar Shire]], the [[Eldest of Aydahar]] or through natural attrition.  The Town Eldest is often quite literally the eldest [[Aydahar]] in the settlement.
+* [[Zhenis Yerbolat]] - has been appointed to the position of [[Eldest of Kara]]. The Town Eldest of [[Kara]] is a position that may either be granted by the [[Eldest of the Kara Aydahar Region]], the [[Eldest of Aydahar]] or through natural attrition.  The Town Eldest is often quite literally the eldest [[Aydahar]] in the settlement.
 * [[Zhannur Suleimen]] - has been appointed to the position of [[Eldest Officer of the Kara Militia]]. This is a position that may either be granted by the Town Eldest, the regional Eldest or the Eldest of the Confederation.  The Eldest Officer is responsible for protecting the citizens of the settlement from threats within and without.
 * [[Togzhan Gulnur]] - has been appointed to the position of [[Eldest Disciple of the Kara Chantry of Jormungandr]], who is responsible for maintaining the words and deeds of [[Woden]] through the eyes of [[Jormungandr]].