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While delusions of grandeur danced in their heads;<br> | While delusions of grandeur danced in their heads;<br> | ||
− | With Matao still in armour and | + | With Matao still in armour and Grief soon to snap,<br> |
We had just settled down for a well deserved nap,<br> | We had just settled down for a well deserved nap,<br> | ||
When down in the keep there arose such a clatter,<br> | When down in the keep there arose such a clatter,<br> | ||
− | + | Grief sprang from his bed to see what was the matter.<br> | |
Away to the tunnel he flew like a flash,<br> | Away to the tunnel he flew like a flash,<br> | ||
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Gave the lustre of mid-day to objects throughout,<br> | Gave the lustre of mid-day to objects throughout,<br> | ||
When, what to his wondering eyes should appear,<br> | When, what to his wondering eyes should appear,<br> | ||
− | But a carrion crawler! | + | But a carrion crawler! Grief’s gut filled with fear,<br> |
With features and fangs, so horrid and sick,<br> | With features and fangs, so horrid and sick,<br> | ||
He knew in a moment this was not to be quick.<br> | He knew in a moment this was not to be quick.<br> | ||
More rapid than eagles the crawler it came,<br> | More rapid than eagles the crawler it came,<br> | ||
− | So | + | So Grief angrily shouted for his party by name:<br> |
"Now, Panamon! now, Rajok! now Matao, and Obsidian!<br> | "Now, Panamon! now, Rajok! now Matao, and Obsidian!<br> | ||
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And when I arrived at the top of the stairs,<br> | And when I arrived at the top of the stairs,<br> | ||
− | Rajok loosed some more arrows, while | + | Rajok loosed some more arrows, while Grief said his prayers;<br> |
The carrion crawler was broad and it’s belly,<br> | The carrion crawler was broad and it’s belly,<br> |