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Because the transfer of ownership of the keep was never officially filed with the the Boyar of [[Karagay Province]], [[Alanar Akimi]] laid claim to the keep, insisting that no transfer was ever made.  He insisted that the keep, now newly prosperous was always, in fact, his and his alone.  He enlisted his father, [[Irimshik Akimi]], the governor of [[Balagash]] to take back the keep.
 
Because the transfer of ownership of the keep was never officially filed with the the Boyar of [[Karagay Province]], [[Alanar Akimi]] laid claim to the keep, insisting that no transfer was ever made.  He insisted that the keep, now newly prosperous was always, in fact, his and his alone.  He enlisted his father, [[Irimshik Akimi]], the governor of [[Balagash]] to take back the keep.
  
Before [[Irimshik Akimi]] could evict [[Rayjok Halperion]] and his company, however, [[Hedgewind Jalinbeti]] made a plea to the Boyar, [[Kadir Meyram]].  Hedgewind argued that not only did [[Rayjok Halperion]] rescue the keep from being turned into rubble, but that he was actively living in, maintaining and daily improving the keep.  He argued that Rayjock's actions not only improved the keep, but also the surrounding lands and the economy of the entire province.
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Before [[Irimshik Akimi]] could evict [[Rayjok Halperion]] and his company, however, [[Hedgwind Jalinbeti]] made a plea to the Boyar, [[Kadir Meyram]].  Hedgewind argued that not only did [[Rayjok Halperion]] rescue the keep from being turned into rubble, but that he was actively living in, maintaining and daily improving the keep.  He argued that Rayjock's actions not only improved the keep, but also the surrounding lands and the economy of the entire province.
  
 
[[Kadir Meyram]] ultimately sided with Jalinbeti and ordered [[Irimshik Akimi]] to stand down.  He further appointed [[Rayjok Halperion]] to the title of Governor of the lands surrounding the keep, which were already attracting squatters and new residents.  On hearing the news, [[Rayjok Halperion]] dubbed the area the township of [[Halperion]] and renamed the keep the more fitting [[Halperion Keep]].
 
[[Kadir Meyram]] ultimately sided with Jalinbeti and ordered [[Irimshik Akimi]] to stand down.  He further appointed [[Rayjok Halperion]] to the title of Governor of the lands surrounding the keep, which were already attracting squatters and new residents.  On hearing the news, [[Rayjok Halperion]] dubbed the area the township of [[Halperion]] and renamed the keep the more fitting [[Halperion Keep]].

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